When We Were Mothers: A Novel

by Nicci Kadilak

Genres: Dystopian; Genetic Engineering

Synopsis

Lucinda was born to guide her mother’s secret society out of the shadows. But no one ever told her how much she would have to sacrifice.

 

As First Daughter of the Garden Society, Lucinda has devoted her life to bringing natural birth back to a world where it has been outlawed. But when her best friend dies giving birth illegally and Lucinda is forced to cover up the cause of death, the stakes of this lifelong secret become all too real.

 

Emeka is a decorated detective known for his objectivity and level head. But his latest case leads him too close to home, and he must shift his perspective--or risk losing those closest to him.

 

Can Lucinda evade Emeka's investigation and keep the Society and all its members alive? Or will the world her mother spent a lifetime building collapse, taking Lucinda and all her Sisters along with it?

 

Lucinda is a strong female protagonist who showcases women's resilience and vulnerability. When We Were Mothers is perfect for fans of The Handmaid's Tale and anyone who enjoys a suspenseful story about a world that hasn't arrived yet, but very well could.

 

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Release date: January 17, 2023

Publisher: Nicci Kadilak

Print pages: 310

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1

IT’S BEEN SIX YEARS since Lucinda lived up here with Zavi, passing the most conspicuous months of her pregnancy under lock and key as they waited for Serafina to be born. But she’s no stranger to these rooms; she returns often and gives what she can to whatever Sister is in residence. A checkup, some company—anything to add some color to three long months with nothing to do but watch her belly grow and wait.

“Celeste?” she calls, and the insulated walls drink in the sound.

“Just a minute!” says Celeste from the bedroom. She sounds in good spirits. Must not be too far along.

Lucinda rounds the burgundy sofa, pacing her usual path around the living area while she waits. The network of flowers embroidered on the drapery draws her near, a surrogate for the open air on the other side of the picture window. The tapestry is a controlled chaos of blossoms, but in the rectangular halo of moonlight spilling in around the edges, only the purple lotuses shimmer.

Lucinda traces a petal with her fingertip. The flowers are supposed to suggest comfort and peace. But to Lucinda, they only ever signaled isolation. An old whisper urges her to rip open the curtains and thrust her head out, sucking in deep gulps of cool autumn air, the scent of the river in the distance.

But Lucinda is free to come and go as she pleases. Celeste is the one tucked away in here now, though maybe not for long.

The message chimed through Lucinda’s darkened bedroom an hour ago. Maybe you should come.

She threw on leggings and an oversized black sweatshirt from the pile in the closet floor, finger-combed her hair, and cursed the autochef for being out of coffee. Even uncaffeinated, she must have set a record for fastest trip to the greenhouse. “Come on,” she said as the elevator’s authenticator took far too long to scan her in. She hardly registered the canopy around her, inky black in the dim light of emergency exit signs, as she rose through the glass tube to the secured birthing floor.

Can it be time already? Celeste’s body offered no hint yesterday evening as they and their Sisters worked the ground in their Family garden plot on the lower level, or as she ambled away toward the elevator that would return her to her temporary home up here. Things change quickly, though, as her mother never fails to remind her. It’s important to always be prepared.

The bedroom door opens, and Lucinda turns to see Celeste in the doorway, bracing herself against the wooden frame. Her eyes and nose scrunch up. “Ooh!” She stands there for a moment, her breathing deep and deliberate, and Lucinda looks her over. Her belly hangs lower now; her stance is wider. Celeste was right to call Lucinda. There’s a good chance this baby will be here today.

Celeste straightens and takes a deep breath, then blows it out through pursed lips.

“You okay?” says Lucinda.

Celeste’s smile is radiant, as always. “Yeah,” she says. “It’s been coming and going for a while now. That was a good one, though.” She glides toward Lucinda, more graceful on the brink of labor than Lucinda’s been in all her life. Celeste settles onto the sofa after much shifting, and Lucinda sits opposite her. Their bodies angle comfortably toward each other like when they were twelve years old and gossiping about the gym teacher or the cute boy who winked at Lucinda in math class.

“Babe,” Martin's voice sounds from the bedroom. “You forgot your electrolyte water,” He comes over and hands Celeste the glass, kissing the blonde curls piled on top of her head. “Hey Lucinda,” he says with a nervous wave. His eyes are clear, considering the hour. Quite a contrast to Zavi, snoring in a tangle of soft sheets and heavy blankets when she left. “Thanks, babe,” Celeste says. “Now go back to sleep.”

Martin grins. “How could I sleep at a time like this? Not gonna happen. But I’ll leave you to talk. I’ll be in the bedroom watching those old documentaries on childbirth if you need me.” He kisses Celeste again and is gone.

Celeste chuckles and rolls her eyes. “Hope you catch something you missed the first twenty times,” she says after him.

When the door closes behind him, Lucinda says, “How’s he been coping with the seclusion?”

“Are you kidding?” Celeste laughs. “You know Martin. He’s so worried something will go wrong, he’s been trying to wrap me in a bubble for nine months. I think he secretly loves having me locked in here.” Lucinda has seen her fair share of nervous partners since she had Serafina, the first natural birth in a hundred years, but Martin wins the award for most anxious. Celeste glances back at the door. “I’m sure once the baby comes and we get back home, things will go back to normal.”

Lucinda smiles. “Soon enough,” she says. But the word rings in her ears. Normal. When have things ever been normal for them? In her earliest memories, she kneels next to Celeste and their Sisters in the Garden as the Mothers’ murmurs drift through the empty space. Though they were too young to grasp most of the conversation floating around them, certain words were unmistakable. Different. Special. Never once were they called normal.

“I almost slipped up today,” Celeste says, the words seeming to fall out unexpectedly. The memory dissipates, and Lucinda’s eyes focus on her Sister. Celeste, in turn, twists the pendant of her necklace and looks anywhere but at Lucinda.

“Slipped?” says Lucinda.

Celeste drums her fingers on her belly. “On the phone,” she says, finally making eye contact. “With Martin’s mom. Little stinker kicked me in the bladder, so hard I thought I peed a little. I almost said something.”

“But you didn’t,” says Lucinda, letting out a breath she didn’t realize she’d been holding.

“Barely caught myself. Told her I stubbed my toe or something.” Celeste lets out a mirthless chuckle. “I think I just need to stop talking to people until she’s born.”

“Maybe a good idea,” Lucinda says, and immediately she wishes she hadn’t. There’s no room for careless mistakes. Still, Celeste is one of her oldest friends, and Lucinda hates sounding like her overbearing mother.

Celeste’s smile fades. “I was joking,” she says. She stares past Lucinda at the covered window. “I’m already stir crazy enough. I think I’d die if I couldn’t even talk to anyone.”

Lucinda pats Celeste on the knee. “I’ve been there, trust me,” she says, recalling her urge only moments ago to break free. “But the end is in sight! Seems like she’s getting ready for her grand entrance.” Lucinda can almost feel the warm bundle in her arms, the tiny fingers encircling her thumb.

“The wait is killing me,” Celeste says. “I don’t know how you did it.”

Does she mean the unbearable anticipation of waiting for the baby or the torture of being locked away for three months? Either way, the answer is the same. “No choice,” Lucinda says with a shrug. “Anyway, anything that happened before the baby is just a blur now. You’ll see after she’s born.” She leans towards Celeste’s belly, close enough to catch the aroma of rose-scented lotion. “And I can’t wait to meet you, little girl. You’re going to be beautiful, just like your mama. Do you have a name yet?” she says, raising her eyes to meet Celeste’s.

Celeste grins. “Maybe. But we’re not sharing until after she’s born, just like I told you last time you asked. Oh!” She holds a hand to her belly and her smile widens. “There she is. She knows your voice already.”

They sit together, giggling as the lumps in Celeste’s abdomen pop up, rearrange themselves, and disappear. Those little movements were Lucinda’s favorite part of pregnancy. Even six years later, she still feels phantom twinges in her belly from time to time, Serafina’s body forever impressed upon her insides.

Celeste stiffens and takes in a sharp breath.

“You okay?” Lucinda says again.

Celeste nods, closing her eyes and settling back into the deep breathing rhythm from before. Lucinda finds her own breath mirroring Celeste’s, and after a moment they both relax back into the sofa. Lucinda looks at her watch. “Ten minutes since the last one, 30-second duration,” she says to Celeste. It’s early yet.

“She would keep it a secret, you know,” Celeste says.

Lucinda raises her eyebrows.

“Martin’s mom. She wouldn’t say anything.”

“Celeste,” Lucinda says. “You know you can’t—”

“Right, yes, of course,” says Celeste. “I never would. I just think sometimes, you know, maybe it’s not such a big deal. If it’s someone we trust. I mean, we tell our partners, don’t we?” Celeste searches Lucinda’s face, looking for reassurance Lucinda can’t give.

“It would be pretty hard not to tell our partners,” Lucinda says. “But we don’t vet their family members the way we do with them. No matter how much you trust someone, no matter how well you think you know them, people change when they have this kind of information. And it only takes one. You know we can’t risk it.”

The Mothers never told them what would happen if the wrong person found out they weren’t safeguarded—How could they know?—but that didn’t prevent the girls from making up their own stories. They turned it into a macabre game sometimes, taking turns thinking up increasingly worse punishments for their crime. The Mothers would be arrested. Or maybe the Sisters would be kidnapped, safeguarded by doctors, and sent to live with families that followed the rules. Or perhaps they’d be sent to some kind of jail for kids, never to see their friends or family again.

When they were children, it was all make-believe. Nothing would happen, of course. Because the girls and their Mothers would keep quiet, and no one would ever find out.

But now they’re all grown up. As more Sisters become pregnant and give birth instead of using the required nursery wombs, protecting them from being discovered has become much harder. The danger that was once theoretical is now very real. If one Sister were found out, the others wouldn’t be far behind. Would their children be taken from them? Maybe they would be arrested, their families dismantled, or worse. Lucinda blinks away an image of Serafina being pulled away from her, crying the animal screams of a child ripped from her mother. And, though she was the first, Sera is far from the only one. The Garden is full of natural-born, unaltered little girls. One slip could tear countless families apart.

Lucinda’s fingers are digging into her thighs through the fabric of her leggings. She flattens her palms, rubbing away the sting. It’s no use getting her imagination running. Yes, her job has gotten more difficult, and the stakes are higher than ever. But she’s been preparing for this work since the day she was born. As long as she follows her mother’s guidance and keeps leading the way for her Sisters, they’ll all stay safe.

And right now, Celeste’s face reminds her, there are more pressing things to attend to.

Another ten minutes.

“Getting worse or staying the same?” she says when Celeste pushes the air from her lungs.

“That one wasn’t great,” says Celeste. Her lip is still curled up in discomfort.

“Want me to call the others?”

“Nah,” says Celeste. “It’ll be a while, won’t it?”

“Probably,” says Lucinda.

“This is the boring part, then.” Celeste’s grin is back, and it makes Lucinda smile, too. If any part of birth could be considered boring, this is it.

“You think I could sneak out for a coffee?” says Lucinda. “My autochef was out. I’ll just be over at Bel’s. I’ll see if I can get Astor out.”

Celeste laughs. “Yeah, of course,” she says. “Like I said, boring. I’m sure Martin will be thrilled to keep me company.” As soon as Lucinda stands to leave, Martin appears in the bedroom doorway.

“Wow. Were you watching that doc with one ear on the door?” says Lucinda. Both women let out a laugh.

Martin’s cheeks redden. “Multitasking,” he says, not bothering to deny his eavesdropping.

Lucinda leaves the couple with a list of instructions: Walk; Hydrate; Bounce on the big ball; Have a snack now, while Celeste can keep it down; Rest; Watch something on the wallscreen.

“Maybe don’t call your mother-in-law, though,” Lucinda says with a wink.

Celeste’s cheeks flush.

“Kidding!” says Lucinda, giving Celeste’s shoulder a squeeze. “I’ll check you out on the monitor when I get back.”

Martin walks her to the door. “Everything’s good, right?” he asks. He’s smiling, but Lucinda could reach out and touch his anxiety.

Lucinda squeezes Martin’s shoulders. “It’s fine.” She lowers her voice. “Do me a favor and at least pretend to be relaxed, okay? Your nerves will rub off. Be cool.”

Martin chuckles, shaking the hair back from his face. “Be cool. Got it. Cool is my middle name. Now, go and get caffeinated. We need you at your sharpest.”

When Lucinda pulls the suite’s door closed behind her, Celeste is standing next to the tapestry-covered window. If she’s anything like Lucinda, she’s counting down the hours until she can be on the other side again.

***

The nerves set in as the elevator doors slide closed. She’s attended a dozen or more births, but the emotional stew of nervousness and excitement never lessens. As she holds out her hand to the scanner next to the button panel once more, goosebumps move over her skin. A bright purple projection unfurls in her palm—a lotus blossom, opening one petal at a time, that she can see only through the overlay enhancement in her glasses. Slow down and breathe. The scanner verifies her photogram, and the platform begins to glide down through the clear shaft.

Lucinda’s heart gradually slows. Everything about Celeste’s pregnancy up to now has been textbook, and the birth most likely will be, too. So what if it’s a week or two early? She’s still in the range of normal. The best thing Lucinda can do is to follow her own advice. Be cool. Birth is natural. Before the laws changed, people had been having babies this way since the beginning of time.

Besides, they won’t be alone. With the tap of a button, Lucinda will summon the rest of the Family to Celeste’s side when the time is right. She smiles at the thought of huddling with her Sisters around a laboring Celeste, as they’ve done with every Society birth. And, of course, Mother will be there. She was there when Sera was born, and she’s helped Lucinda deliver all the others. And she’s a doctor. If something out of the ordinary did happen, she would know what to do.

Lucinda can’t imagine ever having that kind of confidence in herself.

She takes out her mobile and brings up her message thread with Astor. At the suite w C, she types. I think today’s the day. Coffee @ Bel’s? As she waits for Astor’s response, the garden plots below come into greater relief. The gardens up here mirror those on the secured lower level, where the Garden Society has been gathering since Lucinda was just a collection of cells, incubating in a nursery womb in her childhood bedroom.

The squeals of Serafina and the other children filled the air just hours ago as they ran around and through their Family garden plot, playing chase like Lucinda, Celeste, Astor, and the rest of their Sisters did when theirs was the only Family, the only plot, a single oasis in the stretch of barren soil. Lucinda smiles. The Garden has grown into a lush greenscape. After decades of planning, she and her Sisters are bringing the Society’s vision to life. And soon, there will be another little Sister running through these garden paths.

The elevator opens onto the public gardens of the greenhouse’s main floor. In the dark, the paths she’s traversed countless times look foreign, and it takes all her concentration to see the clearings below her feet and avoid stepping on a creeping jasmine or zucchini plant.

She crosses toward the exit, closing her hands at her sides and straightening her shoulders as she walks. The sliding doors open, and she steps onto the sidewalk and into the outside world. The streets are deserted at this hour yet still bright with overhead awnings and streetlights. Is this what Celeste was imagining, standing by that window upstairs?

Lucinda hugs herself and takes a sharp breath. What was a playful breeze last night when she left this building has transformed into a biting wind that chases her long, black hair in a never-ending circle around her face. And, of course, in the rush to get to Celeste, she forgot her coat. She squints against the cold and walks three endless blocks through the tunnel of skyscrapers. The hazy blue lights of Bel’s entrance come into relief just before she freezes in place on the sidewalk.

Down the concrete steps, she hefts open the riveted metal door and steps inside. A last gust of wind whips at her as the door slams closed, and she reaches up with both hands to smooth her hair back into place. She stands in the entryway as her eyes adjust, trying to defrost from the outside in, lungs filling with the sweet, yeasty smell of beer that never quite leaves a place like this.

Her mobile buzzes in her pocket. Astor: Shit. Just left that place. Fine, be there soon.

The bright neon light behind the bar is almost as loud as the heavy bass thump pouring from the speakers. A man and woman, clad in matching white dress shirts and black bowties, are wiping down the bar, getting ready for the changeover to the breakfast crew. Neither pays Lucinda any notice as she bypasses them and takes the stairs at the far end of the room.

Up on the automated level, Lucinda sits at a high table in the corner. Her mobile buzzes again:  Hot Coffee > 2 Cream > 1 Sugar. Repeat order? She taps Yes, then replays Serafina’s good-night message from her parents’ place last night. Sera’s shaky hand brings Lucinda around the apartment where she grew up, and then the frame steadies as Sera hands the phone over and proudly holds up the new game Grandma and Papa bought for her visit. Lucinda smiles at her little girl’s glee as she pushes down a twinge of resentment. There are more toys and games in her parents’ house now than when a child actually lived there.

“Good night, Mama! Love you!” says Serafina, and then Ruma’s face appears in the frame. Lucinda flicks the message off.

“Yeah, Mom. I get it,” Lucinda says under her breath. At the gathering last night, Lucinda made the mistake of oversimplifying an explanation for the children while her mother was within earshot. She’s already heard the reprimands twice—once in front of the rest of the Sisters, and again at the end of Serafina’s message. No need to subject herself to them again.

The silver door in the wall opens onto a steaming mug. Her thawing fingers burn against the ceramic, but warmth seeps through her body as the coffee moves down to her stomach. As the heat creeps in, she sits back and surveys the floor. A soccer game from across the world plays on the wallscreen for a single viewer, a droopy middle-aged man grasping a pint glass at the long bar. A young couple sits in a booth, both men on the same side of the table, touching foreheads and nuzzling their noses together.

“How cute are they?” Astor says, sliding into the seat opposite Lucinda. Her hair is blue today, shaved on one side and braided over her other shoulder, though nothing holds it in place and it’s already loosening at the ends. Her eyes are a startling shade of red.

“Have you gotten any sleep at all?” Lucinda asks.

Astor grins. “Not much. Stayed out late with some of my new work friends. Turns out lawyers really know how to party.” She lowers her eyes to her mobile and types in her order. “So, you think this is it?” she says, gesturing toward the space where Celeste would normally be seated.

Lucinda and her Sisters have known each other forever, attended each other’s births and weddings and graduations. Eventually they will grow old and die together, leaving their children to keep their shared secrets. As the originals, Astor, Lucinda, and Celeste have shared a special closeness. Play dates during their elementary school days, bowling and movies as teens, exercise classes and dinner parties as they’ve grown.  Subdued, unfrequented, all-hours Bel’s is the latest place they’ve settled—the perfect place to talk without being overheard. Maybe next time they’re here, things will be back to normal, and Celeste will be able to come.

Normal. There’s that word again. She shakes the echo from her mind and turns to Astor. “I think it might be. You excited?”

“Sure, I guess,” Astor replies, retrieving a glass filled with ice and a dark liquid from the compartment and taking a long pull. Whether it’s coffee, bourbon, or both, Lucinda can’t tell.

“What’s that supposed to mean?” Lucinda asks. 

Astor shrugs, her upper lip curling. “You know how I feel about this shit, Lucinda. I’ll never be comfortable with it.”

Sisters begin preparing for what the Mothers call "the beautiful and natural act of childbearing” from their earliest days. Astor, though, has never been very enthusiastic about the idea, and it’s always felt like Lucinda’s job to convince her their path is the right one. Lucinda was certain after watching their Sisters give birth, Astor would warm up to the beauty of it all. But if anything, the opposite has happened.

Lucinda leans close and keeps her volume down. “Astor. After all we’ve seen, you don’t think it’s amazing what our bodies can do?” Why ask it as a question? She already knows the answer.

The silence between them stretches. The wallscreen flashes with an advertisement, the sound combining with the bar’s ambient music in an unintelligible jumble. Astor shrugs. “Sure. It’s amazing. But it also seems, I don’t know, unnecessarily hard.”

“What does?” Lucinda says, as if this conversation hasn’t played out in a hundred different ways over the years.

“Come on, Lucinda. The hiding. The isolation. Knowing the agony you have waiting for you at the end. The risk to your life and the baby’s. If you just did things the modern way, you’d avoid all that.”

It’s not that Astor’s points aren’t valid. Nothing about this life has been easy. Lucinda has spent most of her years terrified and lonely, from having monthly cycles when all the women around her were safeguarded, to being the first person in generations to become pregnant and give birth, going through every step without the support of someone who had been through it before—because there was no one still alive who had.

But their work is important. Bringing this essential function back to humanity, taking back their natural-given capabilities, and helping others do the same—that has validated the struggle a hundred times over, and she knows their Sisters would agree.

Lucinda can’t wait until Celeste can join them again. She’s the perfect buffer, always keeping the peace even when Astor wants to fight.

“Astor,” Lucinda says slowly. “Birth is a natural part of life. And we both know that ninety-nine percent of the time, things go just fine.” 

“Ninety-nine-percent is not one hundred percent.” Astor empties her drink and, after a few taps on her mobile, another appears. “Why risk it if you don’t have to? Look at Myles and Peter. They go to an appointment, pick a gender, combine their DNA exactly how they want, then pop the cartridge into the nursery womb and watch the whole thing as it happens. Nine months later, the baby comes out. Perfect and completely risk-free.”

“You sound like an infomercial. Yes, okay. For them, that’s a great solution. But what about someone who wants to feel her child grow inside her?” Lucinda can’t help touching her belly, remembering the fullness and promise of Serafina growing within. “Shouldn’t she be able to make that decision on her own?”

Astor presses her fingers to her temples and stares down into her drink. “Lucinda. Unexpected things happen all the time in nature. Just look at what happened with—” Astor stops abruptly. “Sorry,” she says.

Lucinda doesn’t need a reminder from Astor to call up that day. It’s always there, close enough to touch. Selective termination, her mother called it, her voice sickeningly flat and emotionless. There can only be one. Lucinda can still taste Zavi’s tears mingling with hers, can still feel the cramps and the bleeding and the unrelenting grief for who Serafina’s twin might have grown to be.

Lucinda swallows, irrationally angry at the cheering fans on the wallscreen, which continues playing though the middle-aged man and his beer are gone. She sniffs. “So, because things might, maybe, possibly go wrong, we should take the decision out of a mother’s hands?” she demands.

Astor’s eyes rise to meet Lucinda’s. “And because someone might, maybe, possibly want to carry a baby we should break the law and make a decision for her that she will have to carry around forever?”

“At least then she’ll be able to choose for herself,” says Lucinda.

Astor suddenly looks half her age, indignation plastered on her face. “Well, I’d prefer not to have to live a life of secrecy. The monthly bloodbath, the secret meetings, the—”

Lucinda blinks. “The sisterhood? The community? The truth?”

Astor sighs and looks past Lucinda, toward the couple in the booth. “It’s all fine and good for the rest of you. You’re perfectly happy to incubate humans inside your bodies, and you have partners to help you make these humans. It’s not like that for me. No thank you, on both counts.” Another dark drink has appeared in front of Astor, ...